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Hinata Admits Her Feelings

By: tetsigawind
Supported and fixed by: ArbyMaster458

Characters: Naruto, Hinata, Sakura, Kiba, Teuchi

Surprised Guests: tetsigawind, ArbyMaster458

Naruto: I wonder if Hinata likes me?
I know i'll send her a note inviting her over!

*Naruto gets out a piece of paper and writes*



Please come over later on,

I want to ask you a question.


Naruto: There now to mail it!

*Naruto jumps off to mail the letter*

*Later On*

Naruto: Hinata should be over any minute

*Knock Knock*

*Naruto opens the door*

Naruto: Come on in Hinata. Hinata, sit down, I need to ask you a question.

Hinata: What is it Naruto?

Naruto: Hinata, do you like me? You can tell me the truth, no one is hearing except me and you.

Hinata: Okay Naruto, I do like you and I love you! I love everything about you from your spiky blond hair to your blue shoes! I Love how that orange outfit looks on you!

Naruto: Naruto come here

Naruto: What is it?

Hinata: This

*Hinata kisses Naruto deeply and Naruto does the same*

Hinata: Naruto, what about Sakura?

Naruto: Sakura? I only know that you're the only woman for me.

Hinata: Oh Naruto

*And the couple kissed as if the world around them had stopped moving*

Narrator: A Few Hours Later

Hinata: Naruto, are you hungry?

Naruto: Yeah, I'm hungry. Come on, lets go eat. Hold on Hinata, I want to give you something.

Hinata: What is it?

*Naruto unzips his jacket and gives it to Hinata*

Naruto: Here

*And Naruto helps Hinata put on his jacket*

Hinata: Naruto, you're letting me wear your jacket?!

Naruto: You can have it, I can get another.

Hinata: Thanks Naruto.

Naruto: Your welcome Hinata. My Love You looks good in Orange.

Hinata: Come on Lets go eat

Naruto: Yeah, lets go eat

Narrator (tetsigawind): In Town

Hinata: Naruto, what do you like about me?

Naruto: I Like your Smile and that you never give up. Hinata, if we were on a mission, just you and me, and I screwed something up, would you hit me???

Hinata: Naruto, of course not, I would never hit you, i love you too much to do that to you.

Naruto: Thanks.

Hinata: Why did you ask that?

Naruto: Because when me,Sakura,and Kiba were on a mission, I screwed something up and Sakura hit me on the head.

Hinata: Well from now on, when you go on a mission, I am going with you.

Naruto: Thanks, hey there's Sakura, lets hold hands and walk up to her.

Hinata: Okay.

Hinata: Hey Sakura

Sakura: Hey Naruto & Hinata. Hey Hinata, why're you wearing Naruto's jacket?

Hinata: Because we are together and we love each other. Hey Sakura.

Sakura: Yeah???

Hibata: If you ever hit my boyfriend again you will have to deal with me. He told me how you,him,and kiba were on a mission and he not intentionally screwed something up and you hit him on the head.

Sakura: Well he screwed something we worked hard to do.

Hinata: Well he's still human you know. And like I said before, you hit him again you'll be dealing with me, got it?

*Sakura gulps*

Sakura: Got it.

Hinata: Okay then, come on Naruto, lets go eat

*Naruto after being dazed by seeing how Hinata stood up for him snaps out of his daze*

Naruto: Okay.

Narrator: At The Noodle Shop.

Naruto: Hinata, did you really mean that?

Hinata: What?

Naruto: That if Sakura hits me again she's going to have to deal with you?

Hinata: Yep

Naruto: Hinata, tonight when we get back to my apartment I need to ask you a question.

Hinata: Okay

*Tetsigawind taps Naruto on Shoulder, ArbyMaster458 is also there waving at the couple.*

Naruto: Yes who are you guys?

tetsigawind:I'm tetsigawind and this is ArbyMaster458.

ArbyMaster458: Yo!

tetsigawind: Anyways, we're huge fans of yours and Hinata, we've always wanted you and Hinata together

Naruto: Thank You would you 2 like to join us for a bowl of ramen?

tetsigawind: of course

ArbyMaster458: Yay LUNCH!!!!!!

tetsigawind: Naruto can I ask u a question

Naruto: Sure

tetsigawind: Why do you wear orange

Naruto: don't know why i wear orange

tetsigawind: Oh ok

ArbyMaster458: Because the orange puts out the seriousness in him. It also represents his determinataion, and his sexiness, men are good in orange tights you know.

*Hinata, Naruto, and tetsigawind are speechless*


tetsigawind: Well, thanks for the 101 lesson Arby.

ArbyMaster458: Your welcome. Btw, I have some questions for Hinata.

Hinata: What is it?

ArbyMaster458: Why do you have such nice breasts, and do you think that...

*tetsigawind smacks Arby*

ArbyMaster458: What was that for!? T_T

tetsigawind: For being inappropriate You BAKA!!!!!!! Not only that, Hinata is embarrased, and Naruto is fantasizing for God's Sakes!!!

ArbyMaster458: Oh......I have nothing to say.

tetsigawind: Why do I even hang out with you?!

ArbyMaster458: Because I'm a lost tortured soul longing for a friend to hang out with.

tetsigawind:.......Oh, well I guess that was a good reason.

Naruto: Let's just order.

tetsigawind: Okay

Teuchi: So what will it be?

Naruto: Miso pork ramen please.

Hinata: I'll have the Diet ramen

tetsigawind: Same here.

ArbyMaster458: I'll have chicken wings, sausage pizza, a large steaming plate of corn dogs, A giant burger, onion sings, mussel, french fries, mashed potatoes and gravy, and beef ramen!!!!

*Teuchi, Naruto, Hinata, and tetsigawind are wide-mouthed*

tetsigawind: How can you afford anything like that!

ArbyMaster458: I'm paying for the meals!

Naruto: How?!

*ArbyMaster458 pulls out a gigantic wallet the size of the World Trade Center, it looks small in the outside, bug really huge on the inside.

Anyways, he takes out $2,000.00*

*Teuchi, Naruto, Hinata, and tetsigawind are wide-mouthed, again*


ArbyMaster458: You know.

tetsigawind: Umm no we don't.

ArbyMaster458: O___O Oh well, let's dig in!!! Btw Old man, you can keep the change.

Teuchi: Oh err, okay then. Have fun with you're meals!

Later on

tetsigawind: Thanks for the ramen, and all that other stuff

Naruto: Your welcome

tetsigawind: well we'll see you guys later

Naruto and Hinata: Bye

tetsigawind: Bye and Naruto don't be a jerk to Hinata or I'll come back and kick your butt

Naruto: ok

ArbyMaster458: Btw Hinata any chance you can send me a nude pic of you??

Hinata: *covers her breasts* NOOOO!

ArbyMaster458: Dang!

tetsigawind: Come on Arby let's go!

ArbyMaster458: Okay T__T

*Later on*

Naruto: Its so fun hanging out with you Hinata!

Hinata: Thanks Naruto! And those 2 people we met earlier, they were really nice,

Naruto: They sure were, except for that one guy, who wast it again???

Hinata: I think it was ArbyMaster458?

Naruto: Is the reason why that's his name because of the Halo series?

Hinata: Yeah I guess so. You know Naruto, I've played Halo 3

Naruto: Really, how was it?

Hinata: I'm the top Halo 3 player in the world, never been killed before.

Naruto: Cool, so what's your favorite weapon and armor and stuff?

Hinata: My gamertag is LavenderAssassin106,The shotgun is my favorite, I love Hayabusa, my armor color is lavender and blue, my symbol is a Spartan, I'm a 5 Star General, I've won 108 slayer matches, 72 team slayers, 25 Capture the Flags, and other stuff.

Naruto: O___O really!?

Hinata: True Story

Naruto: Wow. Well, at least Arby is not here.

ArbyMaster458: Hey there guys!

Naruto & Hinata: WTF!!!!What're you doing here!

tetsigawind: There you are Arby, let's go!!!!!

ArbyMaster458: NOOOOOOOOO! EPIC FAIL! *sob*

tetsigawind: Come on, let's go play Halo 3.

*tetsigawind drags ArbyMaster458 of the story. ArbyMaster458 is still sobbing*

*Teuchi arrives with the ramen*

Teuchi: What was that all about????

Naruto and Hinata: o___o Nothing.

Teuchi: Alright then, dig in.

Narrator: Later On At the Apartment

Naruto: Hinata, I have a question to ask you?

Hinata: What is it??

Naruto: Hinata, will you marry me?

*The audience is shocked, even Hinata, ArbyMaster458 and tetsigawind*

Hinata: Naruto, of course I'll marry you.

Naruto: Come on

Hinata: Okay

*Outside of the story*

ArbyMaster458: Naruto sure is taking this relationship to a whole new level really quick huh?

tetsigawind: Mhmmm

ArbyMaster458: Say tets?

tetsigawind: What???

ArbyMaster458: Do you think I can, you know, do the rest of the narrating??

*tetsigawind is thinkin*

tetsigawind:..........okay, but only if you don't screw it up. And if you do a good job, I'l buy you XBOX 360 games on me.

*ArbyMaster458 thinks about it*


tetsigawind: And remember, don't screw up!

ArbyMaster458: Okay.

Narrator(ArbyMaster458): Meanwhile at the Jewelry Shop

Naruto: What Kind of Ring do you want Hinata?

Hinata: Well, I would want one that has a diamond imbedded on it.

Naruto: Okay what about this one.

*Naruto shows hinata a ring with a diamond in it*

Hinata: Perfect!

Naruto: Okay we can get this one.

Narrator: Later on at the apartment

Naruto: Hinata, how long have you loved me?

Hinata: Well I have loved you ever since I met you.

Naruto: Thanks. Hinata, this is now our Apartment

*Outside of the story*

tetsigawind & ArbyMaster458:........whoa

ArbyMaster458: Smooth move Naruto.

*Back to story*

Hinata: Really?

Naruto: Yeah, I mean since we're going to be married, everything is ours.

Hinata: Why didn't you and Sakura work out?

Naruto: Well first of all, she is too mean to me, and second, she only likes Sasuke.

Hinata: Oh well, her loss is my gain

ArbyMaster458: Note to self, Sakura doesn't know how good of a guy Naruto is.

Naruto: Yep. I love You Hinata.

Hinata: I love you too Naruto, and I love it when you say that.

Naruto: Thanks

Naruto: Hinata, you said that you loved my outfit right?

Hinata: Yeah I love your outfit.

Naruto: Well would you like a copy of my outfit? I mean you already have the jacket and it looks great on you

Hinata: Thanks, I wonder what I would look like in one of your outfits.

Naruto: Well if you want, you can try one on now.

Hinata: Okay, just don't go any anywhere my Naruto.

Naruto: I won't

ArbyMaster458: Way to go dude.

tetsigawind: Arby shhh

ArbyMaster458: Okay.

Narrator: Ten Minutes Later.....

Hinata: Naruto what do you think?

Narrator: Naruto couldn't believe his eyes, Hinata looked wonderful in his outfit!

ArbyMaster458:.........and sexy

tetsigawind: Arby!!!!!! One more time and no XBOX 360 games for you!!!

*ArbyMaster458 pisses his pants*


*Arby quickly changes his pants in time for the story*

Naruto: Hinata You Look Amazing

Hinata: Thanks My Naruto.

Naruto: Your Welcome My Hinata.

Naruto: So what do you think?

Hinata: I Love it!

Naruto: Then you can have it!

Hinata: Thanks. Say Naruto, if its okay with you, I want wear this from now on alright?

Naruto: Okay, I just have to get some more outfits. Hey Hinata?

Hinata: Yes?

Naruto: I Think Rock Lee likes Sakura, what do you think?

Hinata: I think the same way because every time Rock Lee sees Sakura, he just goes all lovey dovey and stuff.

Naruto: Like you do

Hinata: I do not

Naruto: Do too

Hinata: We make great couple right

Naruto: Yeah we do

Hinata: Naruto, are you still going to be Hokage???

Naruto: Yeah. You know, my outfit never look better on anyone, well except you, you look great in it.

Hinata: Thanks Naruto.

Naruto: Hey, how would you like to play a trick on Rock Lee?

Hinata: What kind of trick

Naruto: Well I was thinking that we should take Sakura over to Rock Lee's house and she spends the night there, and we help Rock Lee tell Sakura

how he feels?

Hinata: That's a good idea.

Naruto: All this planning is making me hungry, you want something to eat?

Hinata: Yeah, let's go get ramen.

Naruto: You read my mind, now this is why we're a good couple. Are you going to wear your new outfit?

Hinata: Yeah, I like it.

Naruto: Then come on, lets go eat

In Town Again

*ArbyMaster458 groans, tetsigawind groans too*

Naruto: That orange really works for you. Those dark clothes you wear, they take away your beauty.

Hinata: Naruto, hey there's Kiba, hey Kiba!

Kiba: Hey is there 2 Naruto's, or is my vision going blurry? Hey Hinata, why're you wearing Naruto's outfit?

Hinata: Because he gave it to me and we're going out

Kiba: Well well well Naruto, you finally got together with Hinata. Well, I hope you too are happy together.

Hinata: Thanks Kiba.

Naruto: Kiba?

Kiba: Huh, yeah Naruto?

Naruto: Well I was wondering if you would like to come to the wedding?

Kiba: I would love to naruto

Naruto: Thanks kiba

Hinata: Naruto where is my Naruto?

Naruto: Right here my Hinata.

Hinata: Come on Naruto I'm tired, let's go home.

Naruto: Alright bye Kiba

Kiba Bye Naruto and Hinata.

tetsigawind & ArbyMaster458: And so the couple went back to they're apartment, where they rested for days to come.


tetsigawind: Well Arby, I guess you weren't that bad at telling the story at all.

ArbyMaster458: Does that mean I did a good job and we can go shoppin for games?

tetsigawind: Uhhhhhh yeah.


tetsigawind: Let's go then.

ArbyMaster458: K

*tetsigawind and ArbyMaster458 exit the room to go to GameStop, and etc.*
Hinata adimits to Naruto her fellings for Naruto thanks to Arbymaster458 for his help [link]
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qwer45 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010
Why is Arby so weird?
tetsigawind Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
hes not weird just that thats normal
qwer45 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010
O__O THATS NORMAL?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!??! Then what is abnormal ho him???
tetsigawind Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
no one really knws
qwer45 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
and something tells me i don't want to find out
tetsigawind Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thats right
qwer45 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
O__O i'm nervous now like he'll come out of nowhere. how ofetn does hat happen?
tetsigawind Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
almost every story
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LLawietsgirl3 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Student Writer
Nicee! Sweet too!
tetsigawind Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Kamikashi Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:rofl: acceptable! You're in!
tetsigawind Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
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